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I am ELENA!
Hello! I am Elena!
- My english is bed, but I hope that I will be to receive you help and learn it.

ELENALYJuly 2014赶紧投票吧！
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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

标题
- I am ELENA!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello! I am Elena!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- My english is bed, but I hope that I will be to receive you help and learn it.
  赶紧投票吧！
- My eEnglish is bead, but I hope that I will ~~be to~~ receive your help and learn it.
  poser8 评论
  
  举报为垃圾信息？
  
  100% GOOD (7 votes)
- My english is beAd, but I hope that I will ~~be to~~ receive your help and learn it.
  Creammall 评论
  
  举报为垃圾信息？
  
  50% GOOD (2 votes)
- My eEnglish is bead, but I hope that I will ~~be to~~ receive your help ~~and~~to learn it.
  jessnicoleb 评论
  
  举报为垃圾信息？
  
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2