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Texto de Chappa - English

    • A cloud in the blue sky

  • It was smaller before.
    • I didn't want any cloud, I'd rather watch the blue sky.
    • It's more calming, it's full and it can be apprehend in one glance.
  • When there are clouds, it's annoying.
    • Some can erase themselves easily, just passing by.
    • However, others persist and grow up.
  • Even when they're small, they're eye-catching.
    • If I wasn't observing it this much, I could have seen that the sky surrounding it was far beyond its reach, that this little amount of water was nothing compared to this infinite.
  • My gaze is slipping on this blue sky, then setting itself invariably on this little cloud, teasing me.
    • If I stare at it to much, I can forget the blue of the sky.
  • There's only it, the cloud.
    • It arrays istelf in warm colors, making me dream about an extraordinary elsewhere, full of mysteries.
  • It's covering a piece of sky, transforming it, making me desire what I can't see, what is hidden from me, making me want to explore its secrets.
  • This cloud troubles the quietness of the sky, moving it deeply by an emotional storm.
    • If this cloud gets too big, it'll cover up the sky in its whole.
  • But I know that its bewitching colors between pink and orange-crimson are fake.
  • My eye can percieve them because of the sun's trick.
    • When the cloud recovers everything, I'll lose the blue-tinged sky.
  • I will not be able to enjoy the sun's illusions either, they will fade.
    • The cloud will be black, terrifying.
    • A lot of water will flow for nothing much.
  • Just for one eye which slipped from the purity of the sky to the mysteries of a tiny little cloud.

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