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Hello!
Hello!
- I'm Celeste,I'm 16 years-old and I'm Italian.
- I like football very much, my favourite team is Milan.
- I go to swimming pool on Monday and Wednesday.
I'd like to improve my English.

Celeste97February 2013100% GOOD (2 votes)
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- Hello!
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句子 1
- Hello!
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句子 2
- I'm Celeste,I'm 16 years-old and I'm Italian.
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- I'm Celeste, I'm 16 years-old and I'm Italian.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
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- I like football very much, my favourite team is Milan.
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- I like football very much, and my favourite team is Milan.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
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- I go to swimming pool on Monday and Wednesday.
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- I go to the swimming pool on Monday and Wednesday.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I'd like to improve my English.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5