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July 2nd
- Today my brother bet me to pick up me, but after it, he double the bet and he lost, now he owe me money and pick up me.
Today everybody said to me: when you are sleep (fainting) you are so quiet, after you talk in others languages, but I don't remember :C.
When I came back home, I saw from the garden through the window my friends and ma copine, my neighbour and my family blew the globes and see happy faces.
- I still without force, in the morning I've broken a crystal glass, but my mommy understood myself and she don't get angry.

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- Today my brother bet me to pick up me, but after it, he double the bet and he lost, now he owe me money and pick up me.
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- Today, my brother ~~bet me to pick up me, but a~~made a bet with me to pick me up. After ithis, he doubled the bet and he lost~~, n~~. Now he owes me money and ~~pick up me~~has to pick me up.
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- Today everybody said to me: when you are sleep (fainting) you are so quiet, after you talk in others languages, but I don't remember :C.
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- When I came back home, I saw from the garden through the window my friends and ma copine, my neighbour and my family blew the globes and see happy faces.
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- I still without force, in the morning I've broken a crystal glass, but my mommy understood myself and she don't get angry.
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- ~~I still without force, in the~~Accidentally, this morning I~~'ve~~ broken a crystal glass, but my mommy understood ~~myself~~ and she doidn't get angry.
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