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    • I was in a 15 birthday party the last Sunday it was good, the girl was beautifull, the food was delicious and all the people dance a little.
    • I played soccer on Holy Monday, I am starting to play after one year because my knee has a surgery.
    • Sometimes I am a little afraid because i do not want to have pain in my knee.
    • I am looking for a new job because i left my previous job 3 months ago, i felt that my cycle in the company was over and i want work in other position and functions.
    • I would like to improve my writing and speaking skills in order to communicate with people from English speaking countries and in some jobs is neccesary a high level in English.

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    • I was in a 15 birthday party the last Sunday it was good, the girl was beautifull, the food was delicious and all the people dance a little.
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    • I was inat a 15-year-old's birthday party the last Sunday and it was good, tfun. The girl was beautifull, the food was delicious, and all the people dance a littlewere dancing.
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    • I played soccer on Holy Monday, I am starting to play after one year because my knee has a surgery.
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    • I played soccer on Holy Monday,. I am starting toed playing after onea year, because my knee has a surgery.I had surgery on my knee.
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    • I am looking for a new job because i left my previous job 3 months ago, i felt that my cycle in the company was over and i want work in other position and functions.
      투표하세요!
    • I am looking for a new job because iI left my previous job 3 months ago, i. I felt that my cycle intime at the company was over and iI wanted to work in other positions and do other functions.
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    • I would like to improve my writing and speaking skills in order to communicate with people from English speaking countries and in some jobs is neccesary a high level in English.
      투표하세요!
    • I would like to improve my writing and speaking skills in order to communicate with people from English -speaking countries and. Also, in some jobs it is neccesary to know a high level in English.
      Misslucky832Misslucky832 profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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