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Texto de SalmaRazorblade - English

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    • It was certainly the best day of my life, all my friends were there, and I was the most happy girl in the world, because everybody was enjoing the party, and nobody cared about the rain.
    • I still remember what I was saying to my mom to convince her : 'my social life depends on this party, don't destroy my life' Yes, I was pretty aggressive, but this worked with her, and I had what I wanted !

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  • Oración 1
    • It was certainly the best day of my life, all my friends were there, and I was the most happy girl in the world, because everybody was enjoing the party, and nobody cared about the rain.
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    • It was certainly the best day of my life, all my friends were there, and I was the most happyhappiest girl in the world, because everybody was enjoying the party, and nobody cared about the rain.
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  • Oración 2
    • I still remember what I was saying to my mom to convince her : 'my social life depends on this party, don't destroy my life' Yes, I was pretty aggressive, but this worked with her, and I had what I wanted !
      ¡Vota ahora!
    • I still remember what I was sayingsaid to my momther to convince her : 'm"My social life depends on this party, don't destroy my life'".¶Yes, I was pretty aggressive, but ithis worked with her, and I had what I wanted !
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2