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Text from Callirrhoe - English

  • Looking for some seriously strict corrections.

  • Hey!
  • I'd like to improve my English language skill, but have no idea where, or how, I should go about doing so.
    • People tell me that my English is good enough, and that I shouldn't complain about the way I write things, but I feel as though I can still improve.
  • I've searched all over the internet, but to no avail.
    • It would be great if someone could help me with this, and perhaps tell me where I should be looking, and specifically what I should be looking for.

МОЛЯ, ПОМОГНЕТЕ ДА КОРИГИГИРАМЕ ВСЯКО ИЗРЕЧЕНИЕ! - English