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  • This second year of internship has been made in an architecture firm and was chosen with the purpose to create a connection between the first year of internship, which has been made within the “” in the “” division, toward a third internship which could take place into an engineering consulting firm.
  • Architecture, as an important chain link of building and designing, has allowed me to make a better distinction with regard to the administrative and designing steps of building.
  • As a multidisciplinary profession, architecture collaborates with several contributors who made significant parts of works during building steps, engineering consulting firms are one example.

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    • This second year of internship has been made in an architecture firm and was chosen with the purpose to create a connection between the first year of internship, which has been made within the “” in the “” division, toward a third internship which could take place into an engineering consulting firm.
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    • Architecture, as an important chain link of building and designing, has allowed me to make a better distinction with regard to the administrative and designing steps of building.
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    • As a multidisciplinary profession, architecture collaborates with several contributors who made significant parts of works during building steps, engineering consulting firms are one example.
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