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Text from Nadace - English

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- My day
- Hello, frends!
- I am going at my work now by train.
- The weather is excellent today!
- The sun shine out, it is rainless and warm.
- Another I will take pay today:), becose today is pay-day...I wish all good day!

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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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- My day
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- My dDay
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- Hello, frends!
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- Hello, friends!
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Sentence 2
- I am going at my work now by train.
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- I am going ato my work ~~now~~ by train right now.
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- I am going ~~at my~~to work now by train.
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Sentence 3
- The weather is excellent today!
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- The weather is excellent (or beautiful / glorious / perfect) today!
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Sentence 4
- The sun shine out, it is rainless and warm.
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- The sun is shin~~e out,~~ing; it is rainless and warm.
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Sentence 5
- Another I will take pay today:), becose today is pay-day...I wish all good day!
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- Another ~~I will take~~good news is that I'll get payid today :), becoause today is the pay-day ...I wish ~~all~~everybody a good day!
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- ~~Another~~ I will take my pay today :), becoause today is pay-day...I wish all a good day!
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