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  • February 8th

  • Today is Friday, February 8th.
    • Yesterday was Thursday 7th, Yesterday when I returned home my mommy said me: "daughter, help me, tonight come the co-workers and boss from daddy at dinner" Then I changed my uniform and wore confortably, and I started to set the table up.
    • I took the plates and put at the table.
    • The plates are white and flowers on bordering, The wine glasses and glasses right beside to the plates.
    • The spoons, knifes and forks left beside from plate.
  • The cutlery for desert (teaspoon) on the top of plates, and the napkin on the plates.
  • Later I filled up the water glasses.
    • After I took the juice jug and I added the ice and look up the salt shaker and sugar bowl.
    • Finally I wore the dress and I applied make up and I went to the mirror and looked up me and I used the bathroom sink and get off the light and I said to myself: "the show begin"

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    • Yesterday was Thursday 7th, Yesterday when I returned home my mommy said me: "daughter, help me, tonight come the co-workers and boss from daddy at dinner" Then I changed my uniform and wore confortably, and I started to set the table up.
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    • Yesterday was Thursday the 7th, Yesterday when I returned home my mommy said to me: "daughter, help me, tonight come thedaddy's co-workers and boss from daddy atare coming over for dinner" ¶¶Then I changed my uniform and wore, put on conmfortablye clothes, and I started to set the table up.
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    • Finally I wore the dress and I applied make up and I went to the mirror and looked up me and I used the bathroom sink and get off the light and I said to myself: "the show begin"
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    • Finally I wore the dress and I applied make up and I went to the mirror and looked up me and Iput on a dress, applied make up, checked myself in the mirror, used the bathroom sink and get, turned off the light and I said to myself: "the show begins"
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