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  • Advertisement essay

    • First of all advertising telling us about something new like products, services and many other staffs, in order to purchase it.
    • So the purpose of advertising is selling as much as possible, and to get that goal, most of these companies (producers of these products and services) hire specialized companies in advertising and marketing to create such marketing strategy, and then the measurement of success of this marketing strategy which reflect marketing company success in first place and then service producer company is how much they are able to sell!.
    • Depending on this introduction we have to say that the man engine for advertisement is getting higher income for the companies, so these companies keep advertising and telling us what they have new.
    • Due to, they are focusing on the positive side of their products and services, and in general they hide negative side of these products and services, to encourages us to buy it even we did not really need, which considered as a disadvantage of these advertising campaign.
  • In contrast, sometimes we was looking for something to buy it like a car, so we start looking into the current advertising campaign to get knows what car producers are offering these days m and start comparing between their offers, to be able to judge and choose which car brand is better for us to bought it, which considered as an advantage for advertising.
  • In conclusion, and as we see advertising has to sides, good and bad.
  • It is depends on consumer culture and consumer habits.
  • If we have a good consumer culture we will not go and buy something we did not need it, and if else we will do that.
  • One of these consumer culture concepts is before you went for shopping you should have a written purchasing list for what you are going to shopping, if you wish to resist such companies advertisements that who encourage you to purchase something you are really do not need.

МОЛЯ, ПОМОГНЕТЕ ДА КОРИГИГИРАМЕ ВСЯКО ИЗРЕЧЕНИЕ! - English

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    • So the purpose of advertising is selling as much as possible, and to get that goal, most of these companies (producers of these products and services) hire specialized companies in advertising and marketing to create such marketing strategy, and then the measurement of success of this marketing strategy which reflect marketing company success in first place and then service producer company is how much they are able to sell!.
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    • So tThe purpose of advertising is selling as much as possible, and to get that goal, most of these companies (producers of these products and services) hire specializedto help companies increase their sales. To boost sales, many companies inhire advertising and marketingspecialists to create such marketing strategy, and then the measurement ofies. The success of thise marketing strategy which reflect marketing company success in first place and then service producer company is how much they are able to sell!campaign can most directly be measured by the impact on sales.
    • ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 2ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 2
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    • Depending on this introduction we have to say that the man engine for advertisement is getting higher income for the companies, so these companies keep advertising and telling us what they have new.
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    • Depending on this introduction we have to Current advertising is also necessary that the man engine for advertisement is getting higher income for the companies, so these companies keep advertising and telling us what they have newo keep consumers informed about new products. **You already covered this in sentence 1. Change this sentence or consider deleting it.
    • ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 3ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 3
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    • Due to, they are focusing on the positive side of their products and services, and in general they hide negative side of these products and services, to encourages us to buy it even we did not really need, which considered as a disadvantage of these advertising campaign.
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    • Due to, they areAdvertisers often only focusing on the positive side of their products and services, and in general they hide negative side of these products and services, to encourages us to buy it even we did not really need, which considered as a disadvantage of these advertising campaign to entice consumers to purchase, and may not disclose potential negatives. Advertisers also capitalize on impulsive consumers who may buy something they may not need.
    • ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 4ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 4
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    • In contrast, sometimes we was looking for something to buy it like a car, so we start looking into the current advertising campaign to get knows what car producers are offering these days m and start comparing between their offers, to be able to judge and choose which car brand is better for us to bought it, which considered as an advantage for advertising.
      Vote now!
    • ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 5ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 5
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    • One of these consumer culture concepts is before you went for shopping you should have a written purchasing list for what you are going to shopping, if you wish to resist such companies advertisements that who encourage you to purchase something you are really do not need.
      Vote now!
    • ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 9ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 9