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  • Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith, Please accept our apologies for the noise we caused last night.
    • As you may know that our son Mickal graduated from high secondary school, so his colleagues came and celebrated with him here in our flat, which caused a lot of loudly noise.
    • I think your child Semon knows about that as he was here last night also!
    • As we know, Semon will go to higher secondary school next year, so we all hope the best for him and for his future.
    • Anyway, In order to express our sincere apologies, please accept the attached gift and we promise that, this will not happen again at least in the near future.
  • Finally, please accept our invitation to celebrate with us next week for this occasion.
  • Sincerely, John Family

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    • As you may know that our son Mickal graduated from high secondary school, so his colleagues came and celebrated with him here in our flat, which caused a lot of loudly noise.
      투표하세요!
    • As you may know that, our son Mickal graduated from high secondary school, so his colleagues came and celebrated with him here in our flat, which caused a lot of loudly noise.
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      투표하세요!
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    • As we know, Semon will go to higher secondary school next year, so we all hope the best for him and for his future.
      투표하세요!
    • As we know, Semon will go to higher secondary school next year, so we all hopewish the best for him and for his future.
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      투표하세요!
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    • Anyway, In order to express our sincere apologies, please accept the attached gift and we promise that, this will not happen again at least in the near future.
      투표하세요!
    • Anyway, Iin order to express our sincere apologies, please accept the attached gift and we promise that, this will not happen again, at least not in the near future.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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