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  • Negative Feedbak Letter

  • Hi community members,please correct this negative feedback letter sample.
    • Dear Mr. Haj, As you know we attend MS Office 365 training.
  • And as per your request for feedback, let me express my disappointment about this training.
  • So Let me summarize my feedback in points: 1.
  • Choosing Training location in Hotel which is not prepared for lab environment which result to take first day of course for internet connection!! 2.
  • They give us scripts to execute in order to create virtual labs which takes the second day of the course. which I think it should be done before. 3.
  • Also we faced a lot of strange issues(like removing VM and recreate it to execute same script) with implementation of labs training material.
  • Finally, I have to say that as we send a complain letter to NH management they promised us to give another 5 day training after one month.
  • Sincerely, Hadi

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