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    • Pls correct all words in this for me. Thank you so much, my fri

  • I read this article and here is my discussion about it.
    • (I write it in 1 hour) After reading this article, I am trying to debate, discussion and simply summarizing by the new words in that article.
  • Anyway, it is all about grammar, words in English and understanding the content of an article by summarizing it.
  • I hope you feel free to help me correct it.
    • - "THIS has been a bad year for the Port Authority of New York and New Jersey, with scandals over a bridge closure and, most recently, a shady real estate deal." As I understand: The Port Authority has been stick in an scandal related to “bridge closure” (but I don’t understand what is the meaning of “bridge closure”) and now it are put in a contract concern to real estate (I don’t know which is “shady real estate deal” - "But the authority has a chance at redemption, if it is willing to move beyond its traditional mandate." As I understand, the authority can pay money for those scandals (resolve it) if it is ready to delete all the traditional requirement which happened in the authority’s strategy.
  • - "Its model of interstate cooperation could do much more than prevent traffic jams; it could also play the leading role in managing the ecological health of the Hudson River estuary, and serve as an example for other coastal cities around the world facing complex environmental problems in a time of climate change".
    • As I understand, this sentence reveals the significant of interstate cooperation.
  • It does not only resolve traffic jams but it also has the meaning in ecological health of an area in river called estuary (Is estuary at the beginning of the river?).
    • This kind of model can be a good example for all other coastal cities following, especially the ones which are facing complex environmental problem.

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    • (I write it in 1 hour) After reading this article, I am trying to debate, discussion and simply summarizing by the new words in that article.
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    • (I wriote it in 1 hour) After reading this article, I am trying to debate, have a discussion and simply summarizing byse the new words in that article.
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    • - "THIS has been a bad year for the Port Authority of New York and New Jersey, with scandals over a bridge closure and, most recently, a shady real estate deal." As I understand: The Port Authority has been stick in an scandal related to “bridge closure” (but I don’t understand what is the meaning of “bridge closure”) and now it are put in a contract concern to real estate (I don’t know which is “shady real estate deal” - "But the authority has a chance at redemption, if it is willing to move beyond its traditional mandate." As I understand, the authority can pay money for those scandals (resolve it) if it is ready to delete all the traditional requirement which happened in the authority’s strategy.
      Vote now!
    • - "THIS has been a bad year for the Port Authority of New York and New Jersey, with scandals over a bridge closure and, most recently, a shady real estate deal."¶¶As I understand: The Port Authority has been stiuck in an scandal related to “bridge closure” (but I don’t understand what is the meaning of “bridge closure”) and now it are put inthere is a contract concern toabout te real estate (I don’t know which is “shady real estate deal”¶¶- "But the authority has a chance at redemption, if it is willing to move beyond its traditional mandate."¶¶As I understand, the authority can pay money for those scandals (resolve it) if it is ready to delete all the traditional requirements which happened in the authority’s strategy.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
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    • - "Its model of interstate cooperation could do much more than prevent traffic jams; it could also play the leading role in managing the ecological health of the Hudson River estuary, and serve as an example for other coastal cities around the world facing complex environmental problems in a time of climate change".
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    • It does not only resolve traffic jams but it also has the meaning in ecological health of an area in river called estuary (Is estuary at the beginning of the river?).
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    • This kind of model can be a good example for all other coastal cities following, especially the ones which are facing complex environmental problem.
      Vote now!
    • This kind of model can be a good example for all other coastal cities following, especially the ones which are facing complex environmental problems.
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