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  • Moving

  • I helped my friends move last weekend.
    • My high school deskmate came to join me with other friends in high school.
  • We were roommates too.
    • It is lucky that we can reunion after 4 years college study in different cities.
    • My deskmate expressed her luggage to my office.
  • On Saturday, we took the luggage to their new apartment.
    • But it happened lots of accidents on the way.
    • She can’t bear the stomachache, so we took of the bus, just after few stations… After struggled to the community, she told me that she was confused which building it is.
    • I couldn’t believe that she didn’t even pay attention to the house number 224 or 225.
    • We tried to use the induction card close to the door of 225, but there is no reaction.
    • Then we walked to the next 224 door, which is opened already.
    • We used the induction card close to door, there is a sound of the lock, there is no doubt that we would go upstairs, to 6 floor, there is no elevator, so we took the luggage with hand.
  • Finally we reach to 6 floor, out of breath.
    • You guess what she said to me?
    • She told me” It is strange that there are three doors here.
  • I remembered that there are only two doors.
    • Besides, this 6 floor is the top floor, there should be 8 floor of the building.
    • I think we find the wrong building”.
    • I was speechless, it is the building it is the floor, she must forgot it.
    • The more I convinced, the more clear she remember that we were in the wrong building.
    • The problem is we did heard the unlock sound, even though the door was already opened.
    • How can we explain it? We decided to called another friend to confirm it. It is 225.
  • She was too shameful to let me help her with the luggage downstairs.
    • Again the 225 door didn’t open, we read the instruction carefully and try to push a button, after the induction.
  • It opened…… It was not a good experience, but it is a funny memory to recall now. Haha.

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