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Text from NARAPORN - English

  • Blackout!

  • A:........
  • B:Hay what's going on?
  • Why do you call me?
  • Do you have anything to do or have a bad news?
  • A:I need a hand to make some money by robbing a bank.
  • B:I am terrified we'll get caught. A:Don't worry.
  • It's going to blackout for a while!We have time.Trust me! B:O.K.
  • I will go there.
  • A andB are in the bank.
  • A:Oh it's very heavy.
  • B:We are becomming a rich person.
  • A:Sure!No longer poor.
    • A and B:Oh!The cob come. Run!
  • B:I am lose everything in my life.
  • A:I am so sorry.
  • This is my conversation that I will show in English classroom with my friend next week.Please correct it.Thank you.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English