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Blackout!
- A:........
- B:Hay what's going on?
- Why do you call me?
- Do you have anything to do or have a bad news?
- A:I need a hand to make some money by robbing a bank.
- B:I am terrified we'll get caught. A:Don't worry.
- It's going to blackout for a while!We have time.Trust me! B:O.K.
- I will go there.
- A andB are in the bank.
- A:Oh it's very heavy.
- B:We are becomming a rich person.
- A:Sure!No longer poor.
- A and B:Oh!The cob come. Run!
- B:I am lose everything in my life.
- A:I am so sorry.
- This is my conversation that I will show in English classroom with my friend next week.Please correct it.Thank you.
- NARAPORN
June 2014
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