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  • Letter to a friend

    • Hello my dearest friend How are you doing?
    • I hope you feel better and your swelling of the face will go away I have just come come with Lera, we were walking although it is cold outside.
    • Today in the morning the temperature range from 7 to 9 C I had he felling that summer finished and soon we will have winter with snow , I put all my warm clothe up in the shelf and plus there is so much stuff that to take it out in the morning when I was going to work would be time -consuming.
    • So I had to take a jacket and I got cold.
    • Recently, I have some problems I guess with health- my hands are quivering ( the words I learn from Of Mice and Men)))( I think I have a tremor) and when we have had a medical check up the doctor dint like how my heart was thumbing She said nothing serious but I must check my thyroid glads as she said i have a like a lump in my neck.
    • That's all for now I hope my letter finds you in mirth Please take good care of yourselves

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    • I hope you feel better and your swelling of the face will go away I have just come come with Lera, we were walking although it is cold outside.
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    • I hope you feel better and yourthe swelling of then your face will go away.¶I have just come come with Lera,; we were walking although it is cold outside.
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    • I hope you're feeling better now and yourthe swelling of theyour face willhas gone away¶I ha. I've just come comeback with Lera, w. We were walkinghaving a walk on the way, although it iswas so cold outside.
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    • Today in the morning the temperature range from 7 to 9 C I had he felling that summer finished and soon we will have winter with snow , I put all my warm clothe up in the shelf and plus there is so much stuff that to take it out in the morning when I was going to work would be time -consuming.
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    • Today in thehis morning, the temperature ranged from 7 to 9 C°C.¶I had hethis felling that (the) summer had finished and soon we will have winter with snow ,ould face a snowy winter.¶I put all my warm clothes up in the shelf and plus yet there is so much stuff that tohad to be take itn out in the morning when I was going to work would be time -consumingstart work which would definitely take a lot of time.
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    • Recently, I have some problems I guess with health- my hands are quivering ( the words I learn from Of Mice and Men)))( I think I have a tremor) and when we have had a medical check up the doctor dint like how my heart was thumbing She said nothing serious but I must check my thyroid glads as she said i have a like a lump in my neck.
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    • Recently, I have had some problems, I guess with health-: my hands are quivering (I learned theis words I learn from Of Mice and Men)))(. I think I have a tremor)¶and when we hav.¶When we had a medical check -up, the doctor dindn't like how my heart was thumbping.¶She said it was nothing serious, but I must checkhave my thyroid glads asnd checked, since she said iI have a like a lump in my neck.
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