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- Help me !!
- Hi guys I'm a Vietnamese girl.
I'm 20 years old.
- I want to learn English and I can teach you Vietnamese.
- In addition, I want to make friends with everybody and looking for my lover. ^^

meomeo94June 2014100% GOOD (2 votes)
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- Help me !!
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- Help me Me!!
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- Hi guys I'm a Vietnamese girl.
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- Hi ~~guys~~everyone,¶I'm a Vietnamese girl.
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- I'm 20 years old.
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- I want to learn English and I can teach you Vietnamese.
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- I want to learn English and (in exchange) I can teach you Vietnamese.
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- I want to learn English and I can help teach you Vietnamese in exchange.
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- In addition, I want to make friends with everybody and looking for my lover. ^^
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- In addition, I want to make friends with every~~body~~one and am looking for my lover. ^^
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