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- Hi world!
Hello!
- I have already passed my exams and I'm very happy!
- Now, I have time for doing what I love.
- I really want to know English very well and I will be happy to meet people who can speak English:).

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- Hi world!
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- Hi wWorld!
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- Hello!
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- I have already passed my exams and I'm very happy!
  투표하세요!
- I ~~have already~~just passed my exams and I'm very happy!
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- Now, I have time for doing what I love.
  투표하세요!
- Now, I have time ~~for doing~~to do what I love.
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- Now, I have time for doing what I love.
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- I really want to know English very well and I will be happy to meet people who can speak English:).
  투표하세요!
- I really want to know English very well, and I will be happy to meet people who can speak English :).
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