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    • Being a med. student

    • Firstly ,i must say it '' Being a med student is too hard'' but i adjusted now.. i'm in 2nd year of the med. school.
    • Primarily you must put in order your life. by the way Medicine lessons ,exams should be most important thing in your life.At the same time you can get hobbies with medicine , for example i intersted in music,especially drums,drummers... it doesn't mean '' Studying in med school,being a doctor are only working too HARD HARD HARD!!'' When u planned better ur life with medicine ,you can take on a lot avocation :) Second thing that you should pay importance,If you wanna be in med. student , You should do everything with love , dont bored!
  • First of all You 'll be interested in Human Life and your job has esteemed so much according to other jobs.
  • If I'll talk about contents of lessons,You 'll see basis lessons like biology,biostatistics,biochemistry bla bla bla in first year.
  • Second year contains anatomy,physiology,histology,embryology of human systems like cardio-vasculer system,nervous system,gastrointestinal system ....
  • Third year includes illnes of these systems.
  • If u will come to 4th,5th,6th class ,you are a intern doctor .
  • While you are a intern doctor , you get teoric lessons about clinical lesson in every mornings , then you start to apply things that you learnt inhospital.
  • Finally If you 'll be patient and study 6 years , You could be a Great Doctor :)

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    • Firstly ,i must say it '' Being a med student is too hard'' but i adjusted now.. i'm in 2nd year of the med. school.
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    • Firstly ,i, I must say it '' , "Being a med student is too hard''," but iI'm adjusted now.. i I'm in 2my second year of the med. school.
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    • Primarily you must put in order your life. by the way Medicine lessons ,exams should be most important thing in your life.At the same time you can get hobbies with medicine , for example i intersted in music,especially drums,drummers... it doesn't mean '' Studying in med school,being a doctor are only working too HARD HARD HARD!!'' When u planned better ur life with medicine ,you can take on a lot avocation :) Second thing that you should pay importance,If you wanna be in med. student , You should do everything with love , dont bored!
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    • Primarily you must put in order your life. by the wayyour life in order. Medicineal lessons ,and exams should be the most important thing in your life. At the same time you can gethave hobbies with medicine , for example iI am interested in music, especially drums,d. Drummers... it doesn't mean, '' Studying in med school, being a doctor are only working too HARD HARD HARD!!'' When you planned better your life better with medicine , you can take on a lot of avocation. :)¶SThe second thing that you should payis of importance,I if you wannat to be ina med. student , Yyou should do everything with love , don't get bored!
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    • If I'll talk about contents of lessons,You 'll see basis lessons like biology,biostatistics,biochemistry bla bla bla in first year.
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    • Second year contains anatomy,physiology,histology,embryology of human systems like cardio-vasculer system,nervous system,gastrointestinal system ....
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    • While you are a intern doctor , you get teoric lessons about clinical lesson in every mornings , then you start to apply things that you learnt inhospital.
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