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    • Informal letter:is my register appropriate?

  • Dear Carlo, Thanks for your letter.
  • It comes as no surprise to me to hear that you're thinking about applying for that job, because I remember you were very curious about it when I came back from England.
  • First of all, I have to tell you that this job doesn't leave you much time to do sports on your own-you're always taking care of other people, helping them to plan the activities they want to try and so on.
    • I couldn't stand the fact that I hadn't enough time for myself!
    • But I have to say that, despite the lack of spare time, I really enjoyed this experience, in fact I met lots of people from everywhere and had the possibility of improving my English.
    • At the beginning I just learnt by beart what I had to explain to people asking me for advice and I was scared of seeming silly because of my potential mistakes.
    • Then I started to feel more and more confident, so it was great to deal with all that people.
  • Moreover, we once had to organize a presentation for important English visitors and I enjoyed it very much.
  • And last but not least, we went canoeing and I really got a buzz out of that experience, too.
  • So I suggest you think about it carefully, because if your aim is to do adventure sports, you'd better look for another job.
    • If you just want to improve your English and meet new people, then I definitely advice you to apply for this job.
  • With love, Jackson

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