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    • Write a letter to a pen friend to tell him /her about new life

  • Write a letter to a pen friend to tell him /her about your new life at university Your answer: Dear jenny, As my know, you have just passed the entrance exam to University .Therefore,I’m writing to tell you tell you about my new life at university .My name is Hang ,I’m a student at UEB .At the beginning of my life in University ,I felt every fresh because of new environment ,new teacher ,new teacher ,new friends.But actually .I have a lot ò thing most. impressed me at university One ,the thing most impressed me was that I moved out from home and lived at the place I rent .It was the first time that I lived without my parents I The other is ,the doing lived on my own so I have to be extremely careful in taking care of my living I felt quite proud myselve to become indepent at such a short time .Another one ,the life in university is free because I take all kind of courses and some of them many bother me much I can totally get away with math classes That was really relief for me .However,free as life of University is the responsibilities weigh more heaver than I imagine .Sometimes,I am too tired to concentrate on classes and even think of skipping classes.a part time job ,It was my first time which tried to find a job .The work that I had to teach English in class 6.I believed that I could train myself for the responsibilities by the job.
  • How’s youre new life at University?Tell me about that I hope to receive your share of the earliest Looking forward to hearing from you Best wishes Hang

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    • Write a letter to a pen friend to tell him /her about your new life at university Your answer: Dear jenny, As my know, you have just passed the entrance exam to University .Therefore,I’m writing to tell you tell you about my new life at university .My name is Hang ,I’m a student at UEB .At the beginning of my life in University ,I felt every fresh because of new environment ,new teacher ,new teacher ,new friends.But actually .I have a lot ò thing most. impressed me at university One ,the thing most impressed me was that I moved out from home and lived at the place I rent .It was the first time that I lived without my parents I The other is ,the doing lived on my own so I have to be extremely careful in taking care of my living I felt quite proud myselve to become indepent at such a short time .Another one ,the life in university is free because I take all kind of courses and some of them many bother me much I can totally get away with math classes That was really relief for me .However,free as life of University is the responsibilities weigh more heaver than I imagine .Sometimes,I am too tired to concentrate on classes and even think of skipping classes.a part time job ,It was my first time which tried to find a job .The work that I had to teach English in class 6.I believed that I could train myself for the responsibilities by the job.
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    • How’s youre new life at University?Tell me about that I hope to receive your share of the earliest Looking forward to hearing from you Best wishes Hang
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