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On the one hand, sentencing to prison is not appropraite for minor crime`s offenders.Staying in prison will not change their mind and character.
- In this case it would be better to sentence them to social servis works that may be more useful for the community.
On the other hand, the offenders convicted for felonies should stay away from the society.
Take, for instance, drug distributors who should stay in prison in order to prevent them from selling drugs to young children, or serial killers who are dangerous for the community.

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Sentença 1
- On the one hand, sentencing to prison is not appropraite for minor crime`s offenders.Staying in prison will not change their mind and character.
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Sentença 2
- In this case it would be better to sentence them to social servis works that may be more useful for the community.
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- In this case it would be better to sentence them to social servisce works that may be more useful for the community.
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Sentença 3
- On the other hand, the offenders convicted for felonies should stay away from the society.
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Sentença 4
- Take, for instance, drug distributors who should stay in prison in order to prevent them from selling drugs to young children, or serial killers who are dangerous for the community.
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