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    • So sad but so real.

    • Nowadays have a job in my Country is a big privilege, most of people like me who have been fired because of crisis has to live in a situation of uncertainty and job insecurity.
    • The government destroyed what great politicians have previously built during last years and therefore we are forced to seek extreme alternative like leaving our beautiful land in which we were born and grown up.
  • I find all this so sad and unfair, especially for the next generation.

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    • Nowadays have a job in my Country is a big privilege, most of people like me who have been fired because of crisis has to live in a situation of uncertainty and job insecurity.
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    • Nowadays, to have a job in my Ccountry is a big privilege, m. Most of people like me who, including myself, have been fired because of crisis has to live in a situationthe current crisis and live a life of uncertainty andwith no job insecurity.
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    • Nowadays to have a job in my Ccountry is a big privilege, m. Most of the people like me whoincluding myself, have been fired because of the crisis has to live in a situation of situation. Now we live in uncertainty and job insecurity.
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    • The government destroyed what great politicians have previously built during last years and therefore we are forced to seek extreme alternative like leaving our beautiful land in which we were born and grown up.
      투표하세요!
    • The current government has destroyed what the great politicians have previously built during last years and t. Therefore we are now forced to seek extreme alternative liks, which include leaving our beautiful land, in which we were born and grownew up.
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