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- my day
Hello!
- Today I have gone to my work by bus.
- After, in the afternoon, I have return to my home about three o'clock, and I studyed my english book.
- English language is very important for me, because it is very important for work and for travel, and because I want learn new language for me.
- Have good evening, and have good dinner. Bye bye

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- my day
  Elige nunc !
- mMy day
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- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - titulus
Sententia 1
- Hello!
  Elige nunc !
- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 1
Sententia 2
- Today I have gone to my work by bus.
  Elige nunc !
- Today, I ~~have gone to my~~went to work by bus.
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- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2
Sententia 3
- After, in the afternoon, I have return to my home about three o'clock, and I studyed my english book.
  Elige nunc !
- ~~After, i~~In the afternoon, I ~~have~~ return to my home about three o'clock, and I studyied my english ~~book~~lessons.
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- ~~After, i~~In the afternoon, I ~~have~~ return ~~to my~~ed home about three o'clock, and then I studyied in my eEnglish book.
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- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3
Sententia 4
- English language is very important for me, because it is very important for work and for travel, and because I want learn new language for me.
  Elige nunc !
- English ~~language~~ is a very important language for me, because it is very ~~important~~neccesary for work and for treavel~~, and because I want learn new language for me~~ing .Additionally, because Ι am begginer on English, I want to improve them.
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- The English language is very important ~~for~~to me, because ~~it is very importan~~I use it for work and ~~for~~ travelling, and because I wanted to learn a new language ~~for me~~.
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- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4
Sententia 5
- Have good evening, and have good dinner. Bye bye
  Elige nunc !
- HI wish you to have good evening, and ~~have good~~enjoy your dinner. Bye bye
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- Have a good evening~~, and have good dinner~~. Bye -bye!
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- ~~Have good evening~~Enjoy your dinner, and have a good ~~dinner~~evening. Bye bye
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- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5

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