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    • in everyday life I have a lot of habits, one of which is the habit of dreaming. as a kid, I used to dream about being a superhero has extraordinary powers to rescue the princess from a monster, or rescue Earth from the danger of being destroyed。in that dream, I was a hero admired by everyone, and thank you, and no one can beat me at that time.
    • I dream a little bigger I have both contain toys, one of which is a ball, thinking the feeling is jumping into it, just jump and just throw the ball really wild Interest。in high school, I parked my dream to be a prestigious university in the country and there are conditions to prepare to get married. and now, when he was a student I often dream that you are receiving a scholarship to study in full the cost of accommodation and studying in the UK or feeling My.nghi farewell to his parents, brothers and sisters children to boarding is really special. in every dream, woke up the next morning I often forget. besides sweet dreams, sometimes I dream bad dreams, such as burnt my house, my parents beat me ....
    • I always try to strive academically and in life for the beautiful as a result of my dreams

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    • in everyday life I have a lot of habits, one of which is the habit of dreaming. as a kid, I used to dream about being a superhero has extraordinary powers to rescue the princess from a monster, or rescue Earth from the danger of being destroyed。in that dream, I was a hero admired by everyone, and thank you, and no one can beat me at that time.
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    • in everyday life I have a lot of habits, one of which is the habit of dreaming. aAs a kid, I used to dream about being a superhero, hasving extraordinary powers to rescue the princess from a monster, or rescue Earth from the danger of being destroyed。i. In that dream, I was a hero admired by everyone, and thank you, and no one canould beat me at that time.
    • iIn everyday life I have a lot of habits, one of which is the habit of dreaming. aAs a kid, I used to dream about being a superhero who has extraordinary powers to rescue the princess from a monster, or rescue the Earth from the danger of being destroyed。iIn that dream, I was a hero admired by everyone, and thank youed by everyone, and no one canould beat me at that time.
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    • I dream a little bigger I have both contain toys, one of which is a ball, thinking the feeling is jumping into it, just jump and just throw the ball really wild Interest。in high school, I parked my dream to be a prestigious university in the country and there are conditions to prepare to get married. and now, when he was a student I often dream that you are receiving a scholarship to study in full the cost of accommodation and studying in the UK or feeling My.nghi farewell to his parents, brothers and sisters children to boarding is really special. in every dream, woke up the next morning I often forget. besides sweet dreams, sometimes I dream bad dreams, such as burnt my house, my parents beat me ....
      투표하세요!
    • I dream a little bigger I have both contain toys, one of which is a ball, thinking the feeling is jumping into it, just jump and just throw the ball really wild Interest。i. In high school, I parked my dream to be a prestigious university in the country and there are conditions to prepare to get married. aAnd now, when he was a student I often dream that you are receiving a scholarship to study in full the cost of accommodation and studying in the UK or feeling My.nghi farewell to his parents, brothers and sisters children to boarding is really special. in every dream, woke up the next morning I often forget. besides sweet dreams, sometimes I dream bad dreams, such as burnt my house, my parents beat me ....
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