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Thank you to correct my letter
- Re: Concerning our training courses in physics.
- I am writing to you about the course that we are doing for one week.
- This physics’ course is very important for our company.
- In fact, we have a very important project in this domain and we don’t have necessary skill to do it.
- It is worth mentioning that this training is essential for our current project.
- In other words, we have to learn a lot.
- So, we have expected to have a brilliant teacher.
- Unfortunately, we have got some problems with our teacher, Mr Smith.
- Firstly, he thinks he is superior.
- For instance, sometimes he speaks too fast so it is too difficult to understand.
- The other times, he speaks too slowly and we consider it like something offensive and condescending.
- Secondly, I don't think it's fair to make us pay extra for explanations.
- From my point of view, this behavior is not justified because we paid for a training course and without explanations we can’t understand.
- I think his purpose is only to earn a lot of money.
- So, that’s not fair and I cannot share this point of view.
- There is also a bright side to the problem.
- In fact, it must be admitted that he is many well-informed but his behavior is not normal.
- I am hoping you can help us to resolve this problem.
- I very much look forward to hearing from you.
- Best regards,
- fabrice0741
May 2014
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