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Text from fabrice0741 - English

  • Thank you to correct my letter

  • Re: Concerning our training courses in physics.
  • I am writing to you about the course that we are doing for one week.
  • This physics’ course is very important for our company.
  • In fact, we have a very important project in this domain and we don’t have necessary skill to do it.
  • It is worth mentioning that this training is essential for our current project.
  • In other words, we have to learn a lot.
  • So, we have expected to have a brilliant teacher.
  • Unfortunately, we have got some problems with our teacher, Mr Smith.
  • Firstly, he thinks he is superior.
  • For instance, sometimes he speaks too fast so it is too difficult to understand.
  • The other times, he speaks too slowly and we consider it like something offensive and condescending.
  • Secondly, I don't think it's fair to make us pay extra for explanations.
  • From my point of view, this behavior is not justified because we paid for a training course and without explanations we can’t understand.
  • I think his purpose is only to earn a lot of money.
  • So, that’s not fair and I cannot share this point of view.
  • There is also a bright side to the problem.
  • In fact, it must be admitted that he is many well-informed but his behavior is not normal.
  • I am hoping you can help us to resolve this problem.
  • I very much look forward to hearing from you.
  • Best regards,

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