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- my birthday
- Today is my birthday, and I haved work because I 'm military.
- In my job don't understand these wishes.
- But I want continue my evolution and is with my family, they're all my world and everything for me.
- Tomorrow is a new day, with bright and hope.

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- Today is my birthday, and I haved work because I 'm military.
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- Today is my birthday, and I haved to work because I 'm ~~military~~a soldier.
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- Today is my birthday, and I haved to work because I 'm in the military.
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- In my job don't understand these wishes.
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- In my job, they don't understand these wishes.
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- But I want continue my evolution and is with my family, they're all my world and everything for me.
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- But I want to continue my evolution and isbe with my family, they're ~~all~~ my world and everything ~~for~~to me.
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- Tomorrow is a new day, with bright and hope.
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- Tomorrow is a new day, with brightness and hope.
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