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- an interesting Sunday
- Today i work overtime alone.
- When i was boring in show room, an elegant guy came and his graceful smile made me feel interesting. i showed him some products' information and he left quickly but he've changed my day.
Thank that guy so much.

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- an interesting Sunday
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- Today i work overtime alone.
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- When i was boring in show room, an elegant guy came and his graceful smile made me feel interesting. i showed him some products' information and he left quickly but he've changed my day.
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- When iI was bor~~ing~~ed the in show room, an elegant guy came and his graceful smile made me feel interesting. iI showed him some products' information and he left quickly but he~~'ve~~ changed my day.
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- When i was bor~~ing in~~ed in the show room, an elegant guy came and his graceful smile made me feel interesting. iI showed him some products' information and he left quickly but he~~'ve~~ changed my day.
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- Thank that guy so much.
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