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  • About money

    • It is widely believed that, nowadays, money has become more and more important: common people are unhealthily curious about the lifestyles and habits of the rich.
  • Many famous people who routinely appear in newspapers and gossip magazines are neither actors nor politicians – they achieved their fame just by virtue of their wealth.
    • Given this attitude towards rich people, it could be said that mostly believe that money can buy happiness; but it is true that aiming to become rich (instead of simply achieving financial security) could prove counterproductive.
  • This eagerness often leads people to work too much in order to have money that they do not even need and that they will probably not be able to spend.
    • On the other hand, it cannot be denied that, to a certain extent, money does actually make happiness: while there is but a weak correlation between being rich and being happy, economical hardships and unhappiness are in most cases strongly linked, since the important role played by financial security in the life of an individual cannot be denied.
    • In conclusion, it is true that modern society is unhealthily obsessed with money and fame; but it has to be said this, it has its positive features: it is, for example, less rigid, allowing in most cases people to climb the so called "social ladder".

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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  • Zdanie 1
    • It is widely believed that, nowadays, money has become more and more important: common people are unhealthily curious about the lifestyles and habits of the rich.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • It is widely believed that,in nowadays, money hais becomeing more and more important: at people's lives.For example common people are unhealthily curious about the lifestyles and habits of the rich people.
      mary020mary020 profile picture Komentarze
    • INowadays, it is widely believed that, nowadays, money has become more and more important: common people are unhealthily curious about the lifestyles and habits of the rich.
      CanTeachEnglishCanTeachEnglish profile picture Komentarze
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • Many famous people who routinely appear in newspapers and gossip magazines are neither actors nor politicians – they achieved their fame just by virtue of their wealth.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • Given this attitude towards rich people, it could be said that mostly believe that money can buy happiness; but it is true that aiming to become rich (instead of simply achieving financial security) could prove counterproductive.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Given this attitude towards rich people, it could be said that mostly people believe that money can buy happiness; but it is true that aiming to become rich (instead of simply achieving financial security) could prove counterproductive.
      CanTeachEnglishCanTeachEnglish profile picture Komentarze
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • This eagerness often leads people to work too much in order to have money that they do not even need and that they will probably not be able to spend.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • On the other hand, it cannot be denied that, to a certain extent, money does actually make happiness: while there is but a weak correlation between being rich and being happy, economical hardships and unhappiness are in most cases strongly linked, since the important role played by financial security in the life of an individual cannot be denied.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • On the other hand, it cannot be denied that, to a certain extent, money does actually make happiness: while there is but a weak correlation between being rich and being happy, e. Economical hardships and unhappiness are in most cases strongly linked, since the important role has been played by financial security in the life of an individual cannot be denied.
      mary020mary020 profile picture Komentarze
    • On the other hand, it cannot be denied that, to a certain extent, money does actually makproduce happiness: w.¶Whilest there is butonly a weak correlation between being rich and being happy, economical hardships and unhappiness are in most cases strongly linked, since the important role played by financial security in the life of an individual cannot be denied.
      CanTeachEnglishCanTeachEnglish profile picture Komentarze
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • In conclusion, it is true that modern society is unhealthily obsessed with money and fame; but it has to be said this, it has its positive features: it is, for example, less rigid, allowing in most cases people to climb the so called "social ladder".
      Głosuj teraz!
    • In conclusion, it is true that modern society is unhealthily obsessed with money and fame; but.However it has to be said this, itat this has its positive features: it is, for example, less rigid, allowing in most cases people to climb the so called "social ladder".
      mary020mary020 profile picture Komentarze 1
    • In conclusion, it is true that modern society is unhealthily obsessed with money and fame; but it has to be said this,at it has its positive features: it is, for example, less rigid, allowing in most cases people to climb the so called "social ladder". in most cases.
      CanTeachEnglishCanTeachEnglish profile picture Komentarze
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6