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- Poem : Friends
- That smile of yours, I found in the photo of my old friends.
The next few days, A report arrives.
- I encounter , There’s not any more existence, Left in your eyes.
- Hurtfully , That moment I recall.
That it's possible to cry over a man I never met.
Just because there's a chance we possibly just walk pass by, In any of a corner.
And in the middle of this sorrow, I wish your soul rest in the heaven of peace.
And that your heartily grin Will not be oblivious.

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- Poem : Friends
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- That smile of yours, I found in the photo of my old friends.
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- The next few days, A report arrives.
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- I encounter , There’s not any more existence, Left in your eyes.
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- I encounter ,¶There’'s not any more existence,¶Left in your eyes.
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- Hurtfully , That moment I recall.
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- That it's possible to cry over a man I never met.
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- Just because there's a chance we possibly just walk pass by, In any of a corner.
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Sentence 7
- And in the middle of this sorrow, I wish your soul rest in the heaven of peace.
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- And that your heartily grin Will not be oblivious.
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