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- My bestfriend and I
- When I was 11 I met at school my best friend.
- When I saw her and her way to be and joke, I thought I wanted to be friends so I tried to win her.
- She was a little bit indifferent about me, but she is really a nice girl so it was not so hard becoming friends.
- After ten years we are still friends, but now our life are separated because she studies in England, instead I have decide to stay in Italy, at least now.
She is very clever and speaks languages so well!
- She seems to be English, not only for her skill with languages but also for her look.
I am so attached to her, I really love her.

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- When I was 11 I met at school my best friend.
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- When I was 11 I met ~~at school~~ my best friend at school.
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- When I was 11 ~~I met at school~~years old I met my best friend at school.
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- When I saw her and her way to be and joke, I thought I wanted to be friends so I tried to win her.
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- When I ~~saw her and~~ realised how funny sher wa~~y to be and joke,~~s I thought that I wanted to be friends with her so I tried to ~~win~~approximate her.
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- She was a little bit indifferent about me, but she is really a nice girl so it was not so hard becoming friends.
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- She was a little ~~bit~~ indifferent ~~about~~when she talked to me, but she is really a nice girl, so it was not so hard becoming friends.
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- SWhe ~~was a little bit indifferent about me, but~~n I met her better I realised that we were different characters. But it doesn't matter because she is really a nice girl so it was not so hard becoming friends.
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- After ten years we are still friends, but now our life are separated because she studies in England, instead I have decide to stay in Italy, at least now.
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- After ten years we are still friends, but now our lifeves are separated because she studies in England, ~~inste~~and I have instead decide to stay in Italy, at least for now.
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- She is very clever and speaks languages so well!
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- She seems to be English, not only for her skill with languages but also for her look.
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- She seems to be English, not only ~~for~~because of her skill with the languages, but also ~~for~~because of her look.
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- I am so attached to her, I really love her.
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My bestfriend and I

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