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Text from Shameless - English

  • Money

  • Nowadays many people are too worried about money.
  • It seems that they can't do anything without money!
    • People start to desire something, then this thought becomes stronger and stronger and it ends only when they can feel the desired object in their hands.
    • We have to blame on the society for this: the whole world depends on the shopping.
  • You can see many advertisements, which constantly try to persuade people to buy something.
    • We sholud say "stop" to all this.
    • I know it could seem not an easy task to achieve, but we really have to start thinking in another way.
  • We can live with just a few things.
  • And we have to prefer the less expensive ones!
  • Why should we buy an expensive t-shirt, for example, if we can have a cheaper one?
    • I hope people will start open their eyes, only in this way we will be able to understand what things do really matter in our lives.

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