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- Subject: Complaining about the corrosion training course Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to you about the corrosion training course that I am doing for two weeks.
- This training is essential for my current project.
- In fact, we fail to understand some aspects of the chemical reaction between our new Titanium screws and the aircraft structure.
- Our understanding will therefore depend on this training course.
- However, there are unpleasant and annoying aspects of the training.
- In fact, firstly, the teacher is not competent.
- He taught us mistaken notions about electrochemistry.
- After researches on deepening all along the course, the number of mistakes increased.
- Secondly, he is unavailable for questions outside training hours.
- Indeed, at the day end, 4 o’clock, he told us that he will answer the next day.
- Finally, he is often late in the morning.
- We were discussing about it yesterday, but no changes have occurred today.
- I am sorry for the inconvenience.
- I am hoping you can help us to resolve these differences.
- Looking forward to hearing from you, Best regards,
- bouboulau
May 2014
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