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    • My current life and what I learn from them

    • Time player: Now I am searching for a job and doing a part-time job in a Chinese restaurant every night.
    • The most important thing I have learned currently is how to organize my time.
    • My object by now is to find a job but I also have to pay the bills, to clean the room and to go shopping.
  • I try to keep on doing sports and reviewing the knowledge I have learned.
    • Every day I make a plan for the next day and stick to the schedule.
    • To be a waiter, it seems like a simple work, but it needs much patience, smile always and familiar to work fast.
    • From this work I learned how to serve clients and listen to the people.
    • Comsol: For example, I have learned a new software during my last internship ( Comsol: it is a Simulation software package for various physics and engineering applications).
    • At first, I asked research engineer to show me how to use it in generally and I found it is similar to software I have operated before.
    • Then, I started to make simple models, read the user guide and exchanged the ideas with other engineers.
    • After this interne, I continued to study the examples in the website, watched their teaching videos to keep and improve my skill.

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    • My object by now is to find a job but I also have to pay the bills, to clean the room and to go shopping.
      투표하세요!
    • My object by nowive is to find a job, but I also have to pay the bills, to clean themy room, and to go shopping.
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    • To be a waiter, it seems like a simple work, but it needs much patience, smile always and familiar to work fast.
      투표하세요!
    • To be a waiter, it seems like a simple workIt seems easy to be a waiter, but it needs mucha lot of patience, a smile always and familiar to work fast, and a quick worker.
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    • Comsol: For example, I have learned a new software during my last internship ( Comsol: it is a Simulation software package for various physics and engineering applications).
      투표하세요!
    • Comsol: For example, I have learned a new software during my last internship ( Comsol: it is a Sa simulation software package for various physics and engineering applications).
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    • At first, I asked research engineer to show me how to use it in generally and I found it is similar to software I have operated before.
      투표하세요!
    • At fFirst, I asked a research engineer to show me how to use it in generally, and I found that it is similar to software I have operated before.
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    • After this interne, I continued to study the examples in the website, watched their teaching videos to keep and improve my skill.
      투표하세요!
    • After this interne, I continued to study the examples ion the website, watched their teaching videos to keep, and improve my skills.
      PinelyPinely profile picture 댓글
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