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Hello!
Hello, my name is Laura.
- I'm italian, and i'll do an english course to june, so i would like find someone for write in english chat.
- Thank's and sorry for my english, i worry!
- :) good evening!

lalla89May 2014100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Hello!
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- Hello, my name is Laura.
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- I'm italian, and i'll do an english course to june, so i would like find someone for write in english chat.
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- I'm italian, and ~~i'll do~~I'm taking an eEnglish course ~~to j~~in June, so iI would like to find someone ~~for~~to write with in eEnglish ~~chat~~.
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- I'm italian, and iI'll dobe doing an eEnglish course ~~to j~~in June, so iI would like to find someone ~~for~~to chat writeh in eEnglish ~~chat~~.
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- Thank's and sorry for my english, i worry!
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- Thank~~'s and sorry~~ you, and I apologize for my eEnglish~~, i worry~~!
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- :) good evening!
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- :) Have a good evening!
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