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Text from de-Rain - English

  • In the city

    • My city's like a magican.
    • Magican without age or sex, or even nationality.
  • When you go out from your home and dive into the boiling, dancing, waving life of the city, you should be ready for miracles.
    • It may be meetings, may be music, may be... well, everything.
    • Yesturday it was poetry.
    • I rushed to phsychologycal workshop, and was already late for 15 minutes.
  • Suddenly I saw a group of people.
  • There was a girl in the centre.
    • And she read a poem by Mayakovsky.
    • It was ingeniously!
    • She was ingeniously.
    • She read as if it were not Mayakovsky, but a words from her own soul.
    • When she ended, I asked a girl standed near me: "Who is she?
    • And what's up here?" "Just a student, - the answer was.
    • - It's improvisation.
    • And now it turnes into open microphone.
    • Look, may be you wanna read something?" I hesitated.
    • But noone noticed, cos enother girl read already.
  • It was Brodsky's poem.
  • People from the street stayed to listen, and then to read by themselves.
  • Pure improvisation. Pure magic.

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