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- The message for my new friends=))
Hi!
My name is Olga.
- I am so sociable young woman.
- J'd like to learn English language better, that's way I need your help, my new friend=))!

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- The message for my new friends=))
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- ~~The~~A message for my new friends=))
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句子 1
- Hi!
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句子 2
- My name is Olga.
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句子 3
- I am so sociable young woman.
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- I am soa very sociable young woman.
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- J'd like to learn English language better, that's way I need your help, my new friend=))!
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- JI'd like to learn English language better, that's way I need your help, my new friend=))!
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- J'I would like to learn the English language ~~better, that's way~~, this is why, I need your help, my new friend~~=))!~~.
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