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    • I want to go to amerike and to go I need to improve my English.I need someone to talk to in English.

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    • I want to go to amerike and to go I need to improve my English.I need someone to talk to in English.
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    • I want to go to amerike and to go I needca so I have to to improve my English. I needlook for someone to talk to in English.
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    • I want to go to amerike and to go I need to improve my English.I need someone to talk to in English.hungarıan man named jake fen,to scare his wife,he has made hung himself in a role...His wife come home.when she saw her husband,fainted.Neighbor saw the door open and entered into the house.She thought he saw two dead bodies and the house robbed.Woman leaving the house, jenn kicked him.Woman, thought the dead come to life and died.Jake was acquitted. :)
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