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Text from ShirleyLin - English

    • A bad experience he have ever met.

    • Last week, my boy Tom went to the camping trip with his friends.
    • But it was a bad experience.
  • After they put up their tent in the middle of a field, they used an open fire to cook a meal.
  • When it was getting dark, they began to tell stories and sang songs by the campfire.
  • They had a wonderful activity there and then, they felt very tired.
  • They quickly put out the fire before creeping into their tent.
    • But a few hours later it began to rain when those guys and my little boy were sleeping soundly in their sleeping bags.
    • At that time, if there was no one done that waking up to shout to these boys, of course they would not leap out of their sleeping bags.
    • Tom related that after hurrying outside, they could do nothing.
    • Because of it was raining heavily.
    • I laugh them many times.
    • But I have missed throughout a scene that a stream formed in the field, which wound its way across the field and flowed right under their tent!!

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