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  • My intent was to delineate a preliminary model for coaching expertise development.
    • As mentioned before, the results suggest that coaches develop their expertise primarily through a self-adaptive process, meaning, the coach drives his/her development process.
    • The process of expertise development starts with personal characteristics of the coach.
    • Certain personal characteristics appear to facilitate the process of expertise development: drive, commitment, dedication, passion, empathy for the athletes and open-mindedness.
  • In essence, these personal characteristics serve as a filter that acts on the inputs into adaptation process.
  • This process is circular and iterative.
  • Drive, commitment, dedication and passion will allow the coach to put the necessary amount of time into development.
  • The coach undergoes an adaptation process that involves experience as a player, experience as a coach, feedback (external and internal) and active knowledge acquisition (the coach seeks out learning activities that he/she feels will assist in his/her development).
  • These processes can be thought of as inputs into the adaptation or learning process.
  • External feedback could be from mentor coaches, peer coaches, the athletes, among other sources.
  • Internal feedback occurs via introspection and was mentioned to be used for identifying strengths and weaknesses as a coach.
  • This process can only occur if the coach has the opportunity to work with athletes and spend a large amount of time doing so.
  • An environment that is conducive to development must also be present.
  • The model is not static as the role of various aspects of the model may change over time.
  • Conclusions The results from this study suggest that the current definition of an expert coach requires some modification.
  • We need to look beyond the accomplishments the athletes have achieved and consider such factors as the level of athlete that is associated with an expert coach.
  • It was suggested that one could be considered an expert at lower levels of sport.
  • This should be of interest to those who study coaches of elite level athletes in the interest of developing coaching education initiatives.
  • It would perhaps be more useful to study expert coaches at various levels of sport since the coach of elite athletes may operate very differently and have a different knowledge base than coaches of young, developing athletes.
  • We also need to address the type of coach being studied.
  • A head coach may be quite different than an assistant coach in their knowledge base and how they relate to athletes and they may have developed their coaching skills differently.
  • This work has provided suggestions in how we define an expert coach but more study is needed in this area.
  • I encourage other researchers to contribute to this line of research so that consensus on a definition can be reached.
  • There are many avenues that require exploration when it comes to expertise development in coaches.
  • The first is how the coach’s personal characteristics are developed (or if they are innate).
  • The issue of open-mindedness seems rather critical as it can facilitate the coach’s learning in a variety of ways (e.g., the coach is willing to learn and willing to accept assistance from others).
  • Reflective practice has been promoted in the coaching literature but the notion of being introspective has received minimal attention.
  • Since Lyle (2002) has suggested that being reflective requires introspection, the development of introspection should be studied further.
  • Coaches in this study suggested that they identify their own strengths and weaknesses.
  • It would be useful to know how coaches do this.
  • It would also be fruitful to investigate the sources of feedback a coach receives in more depth and what the coaches do to adapt to the feedback they have received.
  • Another area in need of further study is if there is a difference in how team sport coaches’ versus individual sport coaches’ expertise is defined and developed.
  • It is clear that more research is needed to clarify the processes involved in developing coaching expertise and my goal is to refine the preliminary conceptual model I have presented here.
  • The end point of this line of research should be a more effective training program for coaches.

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    • As mentioned before, the results suggest that coaches develop their expertise primarily through a self-adaptive process, meaning, the coach drives his/her development process.
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    • As mentioned before, the results suggest that coaches develop their expertise primarily through a self-adaptive process, meaning, the coach drives his/her development processКак упоминалось ранее, в результате предполагается, что тренеры совершенствуют свои знания прежде всего с помощью процесса самоприспосабливания, то есть тренер сам управляет процессом своего развития.
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    • The process of expertise development starts with personal characteristics of the coach.
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    • The process of expertise development starts with personal characteristics of the coach.Процесс развития опыта начинается с личных характеристик тренера.¶
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    • Certain personal characteristics appear to facilitate the process of expertise development: drive, commitment, dedication, passion, empathy for the athletes and open-mindedness.
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    • Certain personal characteristics appear to facilitate the process of expertise development: drive, commitment, dedication, passion, empathy for the athletes and open-mindedness.По всей видимости, определенные личные характеристики способствуют развитию опыта: стремление, ответственность, преданность, энтузиазм, сопереживание спортсменам и непредубежденность.
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    • The coach undergoes an adaptation process that involves experience as a player, experience as a coach, feedback (external and internal) and active knowledge acquisition (the coach seeks out learning activities that he/she feels will assist in his/her development).
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    • We need to look beyond the accomplishments the athletes have achieved and consider such factors as the level of athlete that is associated with an expert coach.
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    • This should be of interest to those who study coaches of elite level athletes in the interest of developing coaching education initiatives.
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    • It would perhaps be more useful to study expert coaches at various levels of sport since the coach of elite athletes may operate very differently and have a different knowledge base than coaches of young, developing athletes.
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    • A head coach may be quite different than an assistant coach in their knowledge base and how they relate to athletes and they may have developed their coaching skills differently.
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    • The issue of open-mindedness seems rather critical as it can facilitate the coach’s learning in a variety of ways (e.g., the coach is willing to learn and willing to accept assistance from others).
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    • Reflective practice has been promoted in the coaching literature but the notion of being introspective has received minimal attention.
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    • Since Lyle (2002) has suggested that being reflective requires introspection, the development of introspection should be studied further.
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    • It would also be fruitful to investigate the sources of feedback a coach receives in more depth and what the coaches do to adapt to the feedback they have received.
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    • Another area in need of further study is if there is a difference in how team sport coaches’ versus individual sport coaches’ expertise is defined and developed.
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    • It is clear that more research is needed to clarify the processes involved in developing coaching expertise and my goal is to refine the preliminary conceptual model I have presented here.
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