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    • Could anyone help me with this, I really want it to be in formal, thank you so much for your help :D Russian internet market is one of the large market in the world because of the number of Russian internet users is increase every year, so that Russia ranks in top of internet countries in Europe.
    • After Russian internet market growing, search engine market also take in a high competition, Yandex, search engine site from Russia, is lead in this market from 1997 to now, even though another site from west such a Google try to take some of market share, but is not going good as it could be many countries.
    • But Google still a number second player in this market since 2008.
    • The finding revealed that Yandex’s strength is the product which is more than just for search and the weakness is MatrixNet algorithm not given verities results and vision for to be a worldwide search engine, there is not worth to invest on it.
    • For Google strengths are management team and employee, there are capability employee to produce many products, and Corporate Social Responsibility, that made the brand to be memorize in the good way.
    • For Google’s weakness is a product, Google has many products, but it is unwell-known because they do not working on public relation and all the product is not in one page, so users do not know that Google has more services.
    • Yandex’s opportunity is consumer behavior, users in Russia want more than search.
    • And Yandex’s threat is monopoly, to have more choices, users would find another website instead.
    • Google’s opportunity is Russian internet market growing, it is a chance for Google be a part in market share.
    • And Google’s threats are consumer behavior that want more service that only for search and Information Technologies and Protection of Information law, Russian Government wants the data obtained by internet surveillance to be stored within the country in order to be accessed by state security and its intelligent services, so that Google could not be allow in Russia if they do not follow the law.
    • Yandex is still be a leader in Russian search engine market, even though Google is a second player in the market, but Yandex no more to worry about it.
    • And Yandex shouldn’t lose Russia, it is the only place that they hold most of market share.

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    • Could anyone help me with this, I really want it to be in formal, thank you so much for your help :D Russian internet market is one of the large market in the world because of the number of Russian internet users is increase every year, so that Russia ranks in top of internet countries in Europe.
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    • Could anyone help me with this, I really want it to be in formal, thank you so much for your help :D ¶¶¶¶The Russian iInternet market is one of the large markets in the world because of the increasing number of Russian internet users is increase every year, so thateach year. As a result, Russia is ranks in top of interneted as one of the top countries in Europe, for internet use.
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    • Could anyone help me with this, I really want it to be in formal, thank you so much for your help :D ¶¶¶¶Russian internet market is one of the largest markets in the world because of the number of Russian internet users, which is increaseing every year, sobecause of that Russia is ranks in top of internet countries in Europed as one of the top countries in Europe, by internet usage.
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    • After Russian internet market growing, search engine market also take in a high competition, Yandex, search engine site from Russia, is lead in this market from 1997 to now, even though another site from west such a Google try to take some of market share, but is not going good as it could be many countries.
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    • Afters a result of the Russian iInternet market growing,th, the search engine market has also take in a highdeveloped and created a great deal of competition,. Yandex, the Russian search engine site from Russia, is lead in this market from 1997 to now, has lead the market since 1997, even though another site from west e is competition from the West, with websites such a Google, trying to take some of market share, but is not going good as it could be many countriesbecome a bigger part of the market. However this has been ineffective.
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    • The finding revealed that Yandex’s strength is the product which is more than just for search and the weakness is MatrixNet algorithm not given verities results and vision for to be a worldwide search engine, there is not worth to invest on it.
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    • The fFindings revealed that Yandex’s strength is that their product which iscan carry out more than just for search and theing, but it's weakness is that the MatrixNet algorithm does not given veritfiesd results and vision for to b. Therefore the vision to become a worldwide search engine, there is not worth to invest oning itn.
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    • For Google strengths are management team and employee, there are capability employee to produce many products, and Corporate Social Responsibility, that made the brand to be memorize in the good way.
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    • ForWhereas Google's strengths are it's management team and employee, there are capability employee to produce many products, and Corporate Social Responsibility, that made the brand to be memorize in the good ways. They employ many people to carry out many tasks - such as Corporate Social Responsibility, this has been vital in making the brand memorable.
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    • For Google’s weakness is a product, Google has many products, but it is unwell-known because they do not working on public relation and all the product is not in one page, so users do not know that Google has more services.
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    • For Google’s weakness is a product,However Google has many products, but it is un and this is not well- known because they do not working onhave poor public relations and all their product iss are not ion one page, so users do not know that Google has morultiple services.
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    • And Google’s threats are consumer behavior that want more service that only for search and Information Technologies and Protection of Information law, Russian Government wants the data obtained by internet surveillance to be stored within the country in order to be accessed by state security and its intelligent services, so that Google could not be allow in Russia if they do not follow the law.
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    • And Google’s threats are consumer behavior that want more service that only for search and Information Technologies and Protection of Information law,Nonetheless, one must note that Google’s threats involve the idea that consumer's want more than just to search. However, the Russian Government wants the data obtained by internet surveillance to be stored within the country in order to be accessed by state security and its intelligent services, so that. Therefore Google cwould not be allow in Russia if they do not follow the law.
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    • Yandex is still be a leader in Russian search engine market, even though Google is a second player in the market, but Yandex no more to worry about it.
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    • Yandex is still be a leada key player in the Russian search engine market, even though Google is a second player in the market, but Yandex no moremarket, therefore it is unlikely than Yandex has anything to worry about it.
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