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    • Nobody will be a savior for you, People gonna laugh at you.

    • Many people in life made mistakes in the past and the shadow of those bad decisions are still following them to the present.
    • Are we all perfect?
  • If we are perfect, then how are we going to learn from life?
    • During these last months when I was searching for a method or a « secret formula » for success, I experienced fails and too many deceptions.
    • When I wanted to change my life for better, many haters started criticizing me, saying that « look at your past and you will know in advance what’s there for you in the future », but if we try to proceed to a « deep analysis » to this type of remarks, we will see that it isn’t true at all.
    • People are saying it is « impossible » only when they can’t do it, so they strive to make that your reality as well.
    • Each time I heard and I still hear these type of opinion, my answer for that is simple and clear « As long as I am alive no one, no one has the right to tell me what my future will be, it is my life and I will do with it whatever that will bring me happiness ».
    • Is it a necessity for each one of us to stay and to become an average person?
    • Is it your destiny or is it just the image which has been created by our « mind » due to fear, the fear of the future?
    • Have you ever took some time to ask this question « Is there any relation between the past, the present and the future » the answer is obvious, there is a process that we call « the continuation ».
    • The continuation means only that what you did in the past and what you are doing at the present will determine what you will become in the future.
    • So if this is the reality, how come that many people lose faith once they don’t succeed in the past?
    • Is it because of the influence that comes from those who don’t believe in them?
  • I don’t need from you to believe in me, I BELIEVE IN MY SELF.
    • Why are we only hearing apologies, like I’m not and I will never become good at mathematics, it’s impossible for me to speak this or that language, you ?
    • Having your own company?
    • You are dreaming, well every great idea at the beginning was only a DREAM.
    • I encourage every one of you to make a travel to the future, look at what you want to become for those days that will come, no one will prevent you from doing that, it’s the total freedom.
    • When I wanted to have good marks at school, I didn’t start hearing what the HATERS were saying to me, I didn’t stop from telling myself that it is POSSIBLE, it’s POSSIBLE and once you start creating that positive energy within you, which remains is only « the concrete working », you only need to fell for it, to spend most of your time to refine that dream, to do all what it takes to realize it.
  • I don’t care if it’s going to takes years and years before it comes to reality, your keys to success are « Patience and Self-confidence ».
  • True inspiration from my best motivators « Les Brown », « Zig ziglar », « Eric thomas » and « Dr.Ibrahim El fiky » -« Philosophy of life » - written by Mehdi BOUZID.

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    • During these last months when I was searching for a method or a « secret formula » for success, I experienced fails and too many deceptions.
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    • During these last months when I washave been searching for a method or a « "secret formula »" for success, I experienced fails an. But instead, I have failed to find this formula, and encountered too many deceptions.
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    • When I wanted to change my life for better, many haters started criticizing me, saying that « look at your past and you will know in advance what’s there for you in the future », but if we try to proceed to a « deep analysis » to this type of remarks, we will see that it isn’t true at all.
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    • When I wanted to change my life for better, many hatersopposed me and started criticizing me, saying that « l, "Look at your past and you will know in advance what’s there for you in the future », but if we try to proceed to a « deep analysis » to this type ofabout you future." However, if we try to proceed to analyze this remarks, we will see that it isn’t true at all.
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    • People are saying it is « impossible » only when they can’t do it, so they strive to make that your reality as well.
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    • People are saying it is « impossible » only when they can’t do it, so they strive to make that yourbecause perhaps they can’t do change themselves; so they assume that it will be my reality as well.
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    • Each time I heard and I still hear these type of opinion, my answer for that is simple and clear « As long as I am alive no one, no one has the right to tell me what my future will be, it is my life and I will do with it whatever that will bring me happiness ».
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    • Each time I have heard and I stilleven continue to hear these type ofnegative opinions, my answer for that is simple and clear « : "As long as I am alive, no one, really, no one has the right to tell me what my future will be, i. It is my life and I will do with it[attempt to] do whatever that will bring me happiness »."
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    • Have you ever took some time to ask this question « Is there any relation between the past, the present and the future » the answer is obvious, there is a process that we call « the continuation ».
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    • Have you ever tookaken some time to ask this question: « Is there any relation between the past, the present and the future » t?" The answer is obvious, t. There is a process that we call « "the continuation »".
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    • The continuation means only that what you did in the past and what you are doing at the present will determine what you will become in the future.
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    • "The continuation" means only that what you did in the past and what you are doing at the present will determine what you will become in the future.
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    • Why are we only hearing apologies, like I’m not and I will never become good at mathematics, it’s impossible for me to speak this or that language, you ?
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    • Why are we only hearing apologies, like excuses, such as, "I’m not and I will never become good at mathematics, "; or "it’s impossible for me to speak this or that language, you ?."
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    • I encourage every one of you to make a travel to the future, look at what you want to become for those days that will come, no one will prevent you from doing that, it’s the total freedom.
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    • I encourage every one of you to make a travel to the future,. Take a look at what you want to become, for those days that will come, nwill surely come. No one will prevent you from doing that, it’s thefollowing your heart's desire. [Coming to this psychological place] brings total freedom.
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    • When I wanted to have good marks at school, I didn’t start hearing what the HATERS were saying to me, I didn’t stop from telling myself that it is POSSIBLE, it’s POSSIBLE and once you start creating that positive energy within you, which remains is only « the concrete working », you only need to fell for it, to spend most of your time to refine that dream, to do all what it takes to realize it.
      Vote now!
    • When I wanted to have good marks at school, I didn’t start hearing what the HATERSmy opponents were saying to me,. I didn’t stop from telling myself that it is POSSIBLE, i! It’s POSSIBLE a! And once youI started creating that positive energy within you, which remains is only « the concrete working », you only myself, the only thing that remaineed to fell for it, to spend most of yourwas the time to spend time to refine thatmy dreams, to do all what it takes to realize ithem.
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    • I don’t care if it’s going to takes years and years before it comes to reality, your keys to success are « Patience and Self-confidence ».
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    • True inspiration from my best motivators « Les Brown », « Zig ziglar », « Eric thomas » and « Dr.Ibrahim El fiky » -« Philosophy of life » - written by Mehdi BOUZID.
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