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  • Astral

    • The teacher Josh, his wife, Renee, and their three children Dalton, foster and Kelly) has just moved into a new house.
  • Not having had time to unpack things, Rene begins to notice Oddities.
  • She hears strange noises.
    • One evening Dalton gets to the attic and tried to turn on the light, falls down the stairs the next morning he never wakes up.
    • The doctors believe that this is not the coma, they say that never met with such.
  • Three months have passed.
  • Oddities continued Rene tries to convince Josha to move to another house, thinking that neither get rid of ghosts.
  • But all continued.
  • Desperate family caused two specialists in the paranormal phenomena .
  • They noticed the anomaly and was invited to help Alice Reiner .
  • It turns out that the boy is not in a coma, his body physically here, and the soul is flying. the boy from early childhood was able to go to the astral plane and went too far.
  • Now his body want to take over the evil ghosts.
  • They come to have Josh went into the astral and tried to return his son.
  • Everything went well, but after leaving the astral , Alice noticed strange behavior Josh and photographed him, this led Josh into a rage, and he kills Alice ,the cry came Rene , she looked fotoaparat ...
  • Found in John moved the old woman's Ghost that haunted him since childhood .
  • The ending of this film is not completed, because filmed the sequel.

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