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    • miguel and louis, they used to live in northern mexico. they had decided to leave for california. they have crossed the river and are entering in US Illegally.
    • they found a job in an orchard / fiels and picking fruits.
    • After , they found another job in deserted place, in ranch. they must to cook methamphetamine , one drugs which was an illegal and risky job for a well paying job.
    • Louis died in an explosion and miguel drove with louis's body in his truck, he has buried her brother in his grave and dug up all the money they had earned/ their savings.
    • springsteen denounces inscripulous employers who exploit immigrants and also they are ready to risk their lives for make money.
    • the american dream is not an easy thing to get!

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    • miguel and louis, they used to live in northern mexico. they had decided to leave for california. they have crossed the river and are entering in US Illegally.
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    • mMiguel and lLouis, they used to lived in nNorthern mMexico. tThey had decided to leave for cCalifornia. tThey have crossed the river and are entering in USentered The United States of America Illegally.
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    • After , they found another job in deserted place, in ranch. they must to cook methamphetamine , one drugs which was an illegal and risky job for a well paying job.
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    • AfLater , they found another job in a ranch in a deserted place, in ranch. they must to cook methamphetamine , one drugs which. Their job was to cook a drug known as methamphetamine. The job was an illegal and risky job for abut was well paying jobtoo.
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    • Louis died in an explosion and miguel drove with louis's body in his truck, he has buried her brother in his grave and dug up all the money they had earned/ their savings.
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    • After few days Louis died in an explosion and mMiguel drove with lLouis's body in his truck, she has buried her brother in histhe grave and dug uplong with all the money they had earned/ their savings.
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    • springsteen denounces inscripulous employers who exploit immigrants and also they are ready to risk their lives for make money.
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    • ¶sSpringsteen denounces iunscriupulous employers who exploit immigrants and also they are ready to risk theirrisk immigrants lives for makeing money.
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