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- Determined to change your life right now
- Hello, My name Kim Chong, I from to Vietnamese, I was born rural poor, I was living in DaNang city.
Counselor Diapers is my job.
- I want to job, so I will learn English.

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- Determined to change your life right now
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- Determined to change my~~our~~ life, right now.
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- Hello, My name Kim Chong, I from to Vietnamese, I was born rural poor, I was living in DaNang city.
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- Hello, My name Kim Chong, I am from to Vietnam~~ese~~, I was born ~~rural poor, I was living in~~in a poor rural area and lived the city of DaNang ~~city~~.
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- Counselor Diapers is my job.
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- I want to job, so I will learn English.
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- I want to get job, so I will learn English.
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