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    • my cover letter

  • I am a graduate from UPMC 2013 with a Master’s degree in Science of Engineering, specialty in Energy and Mechanics.
  • I am interested in the opportunities at {company name} and received this information from {}.
    • Two years study in France has given me exceptional opportunities to broaden my vision through a wide-variety of courses and different culture.
    • Throughout my research studies, I applied these knowledge in the projects taking during this education (such as Compressed Air Energy Storage, ventilation system and offshore energy).
    • More importantly, I developed strong interpersonal skills from these team works with many people with different backgrounds.
    • One notable experience is an project I joined in 2013, from which I learned how an industry project performance and I have succeeded of my part which was modeling and optimization by physical simulation software.
    • The enclosed resume provides you with an overview of my experience and my skills.
    • I would welcome the opportunity to meet with you and discuss my qualifications for a vacancy position at {}.
    • I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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    • Two years study in France has given me exceptional opportunities to broaden my vision through a wide-variety of courses and different culture.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • TMy two years of studying in France has given me exceptional opportunities to broaden my vision through a wide-variety of courses and a different culture.
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      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
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    • Throughout my research studies, I applied these knowledge in the projects taking during this education (such as Compressed Air Energy Storage, ventilation system and offshore energy).
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Throughout my research studies, I have applied theseis knowledge within the projects taking during this educationI was involved with during the time (such as Compressed Air Energy Storage, ventilation systems and offshore energy).
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
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    • More importantly, I developed strong interpersonal skills from these team works with many people with different backgrounds.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • More importantly, I developed strong interpersonal skills from these team worksprojects that incorporate team work by working with many people withof different backgrounds.
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      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
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    • One notable experience is an project I joined in 2013, from which I learned how an industry project performance and I have succeeded of my part which was modeling and optimization by physical simulation software.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • One notable experience is an project I joined in 2013, from which I learned how an industry project performance and I have succeeded of my part which wasworks. I was able to demonstrate my capability of designing modeling and developing optimization by effectively utilizing physical simulation software.
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