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    • learing a foreign language in primary school

    • The foreign language learning has gained increasing popularity in a global scale.
    • Although starting learning it early in the primary school has some benefits, I would argue that there are more drawbacks.
    • Intensive study of a foreign language in primary school does harm to children's development.
    • It is vital for young children to enhance their basic knowledge of mother tongue.
    • However, to begin learning a second language will certainly take up their time devoted to other essential disciplines.
    • In my country, for instance, a large number number of children even sacrifice all their leisure time for studying English, which presents more of a challenge at their age.
    • Children in primary school do need time to learn how to go on with their peers and broaden their imagination and creativity rather than struggling with a foreign language.
    • Moreover, the latter one is likely to erode the cultural identity and confuse the young children in their early childhood, meaning that they may lose their sense of identity.
    • Admittedly, embarking on learning a foreign language in primary school can permit children a privilege, hence guarantee them with a promising future career.
    • The stimulating courses can kindle children's interests and prepare them for further study.
    • Nevertheless, if we postpone these kinds of classes in secondary school, children will know how to learn a language efficiently and confidently.
    • For example, the same textbook entails much more time for primary school students compared with the secondary school ones.
    • All in all, beginning to learn a foreign language in secondary school will be more sensible than in primary school.

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    • In my country, for instance, a large number number of children even sacrifice all their leisure time for studying English, which presents more of a challenge at their age.
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    • In my country, for instance, a ¶¶large number number of children even sacrifice all their leisure time for studying ¶¶English, which presents more of a challenge at their age.
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      Elige nunc !
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    • Children in primary school do need time to learn how to go on with their peers and broaden their imagination and creativity rather than struggling with a foreign language.
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    • Children in primary ¶¶school do need time to learn how to go on with their peers and broaden their ¶¶imagination and creativity rather than struggling with a foreign language.
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      Elige nunc !
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    • Moreover, the latter one is likely to erode the cultural identity and confuse the young children in their early childhood, meaning that they may lose their sense of identity.
      Elige nunc !
    • Moreover, the latter one is likely to erode the cultural identity and confuse the ¶¶young children in their early childhood, meaning that they may lose their sense of ¶¶identity.
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      Elige nunc !
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    • Admittedly, embarking on learning a foreign language in primary school can permit children a privilege, hence guarantee them with a promising future career.
      Elige nunc !
    • Admittedly, embarking on learning a foreign language in primary school can ¶¶permit children a privilege, hence guarantee them with a promising future career.
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      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 9ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 9
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    • Nevertheless, if we postpone these kinds of classes in secondary school, children will know how to learn a language efficiently and confidently.
      Elige nunc !
    • Nevertheless, if we postpone these kinds of classes in secondary ¶¶school, children will know how to learn a language efficiently and confidently.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
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