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  • difference between school and college life .

    • school life is one of greats things in our life .no one deny how the school is more funny than college.i think a lot of people love school than love college.there are difference between school life and college.
    • first ,knowing people is one of different.you can know every one in the class.in college ,you are luchy if you know anyone .you can sit in the class and do not anyone.
    • second,doing homwork.in the school,students must do a lot of homework.in the college we do researches and a few homework.
    • finally,choosing subjects.in school we must study all subject .in college we study subjects that we are choose.
    • in sumrry,life school is funny and good but the college diffeclt.knowing people ,choosing subjects and do homework are the differene in the college life .

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    • school life is one of greats things in our life .no one deny how the school is more funny than college.i think a lot of people love school than love college.there are difference between school life and college.
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    • sSchool life is one of the greatsest things in our life .nves. No one can deny how the school is morea lot funnyier than college.i I think a lot of people love school than loveinstead of college.t There areis a difference between school life and college.
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    • first ,knowing people is one of different.you can know every one in the class.in college ,you are luchy if you know anyone .you can sit in the class and do not anyone.
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    • ¶fFirstly, ,knowing people is one of different.yces. You can know every one in the class. - but in college , you arwould be luchky if you know anyone .y.You can sit in the class and do not anyonestill make no friends.
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    • second,doing homwork.in the school,students must do a lot of homework.in the college we do researches and a few homework.
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    • second,doing difference is that you have homework.i to do.In the school,students must do a lot of homework.But in the college we do researches and a few homework.
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    • ¶sSecond,doing homwork.in thely, in school, students must do a lot of homework.in the In college we do researches and a fewhardly any homework.
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    • finally,choosing subjects.in school we must study all subject .in college we study subjects that we are choose.
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    • The finally,choosing difference is about the subjects.iIn school we must study all subject .not able to choose which one we prefer.However in college, we study subjects that we are choosehave this opportunity,of choosing the subjects we want to study.
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    • ¶fFinally,choosing subjects. in school we must study all the subjects however .in college we study subjects that we are choosecan choose our own.
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    • in sumrry,life school is funny and good but the college diffeclt.knowing people ,choosing subjects and do homework are the differene in the college life .
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    • ¶inTo sumrry, up,the life in school is funny and good but the college diffeclt.knowinglife in college is much better.Because you can meet people ,choosinge the subjects and do homework are the differene in the college life . you want to study and do homework.
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    • ¶iIn sumrmary, life at school is very funny and good but the college diffeclt.is very difficult. Getting to knowing people; ,choosing subjects and doing homework are the differene in theces in college life . ¶
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