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Today
- Today in my countre a great day!
- our grandfathers and grandfathers had won the war 69 years back.
- Today in my town will be a parade, "Victory" ("Победы").
- I and my mother to go the parade and exhibition of retro cars.I am sad because there are few veterans.After 5 years, they will not be quite :( Night will salute.
- My brother goes with us.

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- Today in my countre a great day!
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- Today in my countrey, it is a great day!
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- Today i~~n my countre a great da~~s a great day in my country!
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- our grandfathers and grandfathers had won the war 69 years back.
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- ¶oOur grandfathers ~~and grandfathers had~~ won the war 69 years ~~back.~~ago.
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- ~~¶our grandfathers and grand~~On this day, 69 years ago, our forefathers had won ~~the~~a war ~~69 years back~~.
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- ~~¶our grandfathers and grand~~On this dat, 69 years ago, our forefathers ~~had~~ won the war ~~69 years back~~.
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- Today in my town will be a parade, "Victory" ("Победы").
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- Today in my town, thee will be a parade, called "Victory" ("Победы").
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- Today, in my town, there will be a parade, called "Victory" ("Победы").
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- I and my mother to go the parade and exhibition of retro cars.I am sad because there are few veterans.After 5 years, they will not be quite :( Night will salute.
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- ~~I and m~~My mother tand I will go gto the parade and exhibition of retro cars. I am sad because there are few veterans.~~After~~ In 5 years, theyre will not be ~~quite~~ as many.¶:( ¶Night will salute.
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- ~~I and m~~My mother toand I will go to the parade where there will be and exhibition of retro cars. However, I am sad because there are only a few veterans~~.After~~ attending. In 5 years, theyre will not be quite ~~¶:( ¶Night~~as many. ¶:(¶At night, we will salute them.
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- My brother goes with us.
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- My brother ~~goes~~usually goes to the parade with us.
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- My brother will goes with us.
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